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14 November 2009 @ 11:40 pm
[SPNFanFic] teardrop (Dean/Castiel)  



u-rated, 284words;

just a wee drabble type thing for tonight,

will get back into the swing of Caspe-Wri-Mo come tomorrow :)

"Do you remember falling?" Dean asks, hands sunk deep into the pockets of the washed-out jeans that hang low upon his hips. His feet are bare and he wears no shirt. The muss of his hair, and the yawn he does not bother to hide, evidence that he's just slipped out of a sleep-warmed bed.

Castiel stands at the window, back turned to him, and stares out across the parking lot of another in a long line of motel rooms. It is raining outside. Dean can hear the persistent drumming of it against the roof as he rubs the grit from tired eyes and pads his way a little closer.

Castiel ignores him save for the shiver that runs through his body as Dean lays a hand to his bare shoulder, feeling the chill of his flesh. Angels should never be cold, he thinks, stepping closer and wrapping his arms around Castiel. He feels Castiel shiver again, this time at the press of bare skin to skin.

“Cas?” Dean calls, his breath a whisper of sound to the back of Castiel’s neck.

“It’s not so much that I’ve fallen,” Castiel says, softly, his words so quiet Dean strains to hear them over the pounding of the rain, “more that I have been cast from Heaven, unwillingly.”

“I’m sorry,” he whispers, arms squeezing. His apology nothing but empty words for all the good they can do.

“It is not your doing,” Castiel says, dropping his head to his chest, his body slumping back against Dean.

“It is,” Dean insists and Castiel says nothing else. He just raises his hands and lays them atop Dean’s hugging arms as they stand together and watch the rain fall.

[ end. ]

[ Written for Caspe-Wri-Mo ’09 ]

Georgie: Supernatural - Castiel (payphone)indiefairy on November 15th, 2009 01:36 am (UTC)
Aww poor Cas, and poor Dean ::huggles them both::

Lovely m'dear.
Campaspe: Supernatural \\ Dean&Castiel; tiecs_whitewolf on November 22nd, 2009 12:36 pm (UTC)
thank you, bb!

I love how angsty they can be together, without even really trying to be X)

Kevin Jonesmulder200 on November 15th, 2009 04:29 am (UTC)
Poor guys. Cas does have a point though. It's not so much that fell but that he was kicked out forcefully.
Campaspe: Supernatural \\ Dean&Castiel \\ !lovecs_whitewolf on November 22nd, 2009 12:39 pm (UTC)
I find it so heartbreaking that in doing the "right" thing, Castiel's been so horridly punished. At least he still had Dean, even if he pales in comparision to Heaven.

thank you for reading!
CS WhiteWolf
mukanshinmukanshin on November 21st, 2009 09:52 pm (UTC)
D: Very sad, but touching at the same time.
Campaspe: Supernatural \\ Dean&Castiel; between uscs_whitewolf on November 22nd, 2009 12:40 pm (UTC)
thank you X) I like to think that the fact they have each other, helps ease any pain Castiel has about being cut off from home.

CS WhiteWolf
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Campaspe: Supernatural \\ Dean&Castiel; necklacecs_whitewolf on November 22nd, 2009 12:41 pm (UTC)
:) thank you very much! I'm so pleased you found it so.

CS WhiteWolf
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Campaspe: Supernatural \\ Dean&Castiel; gripped yocs_whitewolf on November 22nd, 2009 12:42 pm (UTC)
Castiel definitely needs more hugs in his life X)

Thank you for reading!
CS WhiteWolf
Emerald Amberemeraldamber on November 22nd, 2009 03:50 am (UTC)
It broke my heart. We can feel Cass being helpless and alone, even with Dean by his side.
Campaspe: Supernatural \\ Dean&Castiel; closecs_whitewolf on November 22nd, 2009 12:43 pm (UTC)
<33 thank you! I was very much hoping to convey that feeling in this piece, and am so pleased that you picked up on it :)

CS WhiteWolf
Mono: Dean x Casran_cl on November 23rd, 2009 06:52 am (UTC)
Aw...very sad...and beautiful scene. At least they still have each other :)
Campaspe: Supernatural \\ Dean&Castiel; &cs_whitewolf on November 24th, 2009 08:34 pm (UTC)
thank you! X) ...and yes, they thankfully do still have one another!