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10 November 2005 @ 09:44 pm
HPFiclet: One Moment In Time [RB/SB]  

I’m not quite sure as to what I was trying to achieve here with this piece, or even if I’ve managed to achieve anything it at all. But it’s an odd sort of flowery(?), smutty(?)... thing. If you take the time to read it, please comment- I kind of like it myself.

 


One Moment In Time

 

Rating(s): PG-13/R-Rated.

Pairing(s): Though unspecified: Sirius/ Regulus.

Warning(s): Odd sort of prose count?

 

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Pale skin, white as alabaster; he lies. Cheeks flushing with delicate colour, an early blush rose, pink on ivory; he sleeps. Lips, plump and full and moist as he licks at them, wets them with a sliver of tongue, flicking over in a sweeping slide; he awakens. Eyes fluttering, blinking slowly- once, twice- a smear of dark lashes across cheeks as sleep evades him, mouth parting for a gasp of breath; he yawns. Fingers curling lightly in the sheets, smooth chest heaving; he breathes.

 

A drop of moonlight on his face, it filters in through partly drawn curtains; he turns away. The rustle of sheets as he moves, hand reaching out- out, grasping at the empty space beside him, confused whimper spilling from his lips- and then, skin. Warm and yielding- (holding, squeezing)- hand on hand he holds- fingers entwining, moving closer, a sleepy breath expelled as he nuzzles- face into shoulder, fingers running through his hair, dark as night and soft as silk on skin.

 

He breathes once more, he breathes again, parted lips on skin, a kiss. An almost touching- intimate gesture of loving, caring, “I love you,” whispered, tickle of air across his cheek, a smile, twist of lips, he smiles, sleep expelled he presses lips into kisses, smooth column of pale throat he climbs, stubbled jaw and hard male lips, pliant and yielding to him, exploration of dark cavern mouths, tongues twisting in intimate gestures of dances, slick and sliding, mouths joined and moving- slow and sensual touches- the breaking of dawn.

 

Cool light shining, sneaking through the curtained darkness- patterns of light across the bed- two bodies, brothers joined together, illicit incest, a bonding; the coupling of pure and unadulterated loving, needing, forms moving, sweat beaded bodies and hands roaming freely- touching, mapping, feeling their way around well memorized skin.

 

He moans; dark lashed fluttering, back arching up, up, mouth parted now in silent ‘O’ of soundless pleasure, eyes wide and rolling; a tangle of sheets as they lie collapsed against each other, blue-grey eyes mirrored, watching love and lust and fulfilment shining, arms holding, bodies melding- as one, together- as one; they lie, together. Pale skin shines with powdery flush, a light cerise as dawn light touches his naked chest- rising, falling, breathes slowing and evening out as they lie- entwined, together, sated sleep claiming them. Eyes heavy with sudden fatigue, eyelashes a smear across bright cheeks, a puff of exhaled breath, fingers twitching against heated skin; they sleep.

 

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Fin.

 

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mood: contemplativecontemplative
music: Trash - Alice Cooper
 
 
 
Aurora Enkeli Medeis: HIM- Razorblade Kissaurora_enkeli on November 10th, 2005 02:15 pm (UTC)
Huzzah! Cestyness. Tasty Cestyness.
Campaspecs_whitewolf on November 10th, 2005 02:20 pm (UTC)
Guess I needn't have worried about the prose at all then? Though I don't think I'll be hurrying to try the same style anytime soon... it's, well, odd really. :)

Kisses,
Caspe
open the seven seals, let out the seven beasts: Blackcest - pretty kissspessartine on November 10th, 2005 08:25 pm (UTC)
Yum.

a light cerise as dawn light touches his naked chest- rising, falling, breathes slowing and evening out as they lie- entwined, together, sated sleep claiming them.

Loved that - in fact the whole thing, but the last prargraph is especially nice. Good stuff :)
Campaspecs_whitewolf on November 11th, 2005 11:33 am (UTC)
Thanks! :) It was fun to write if anything else. I quite liked the beginning myself, the second sentence at least, it's what spawned this whole style/piece. Ta for reading!

Peace,
Caspe
Ciaranbouncy on November 10th, 2005 10:04 pm (UTC)
This is so stunning, Caspe. Really really brilliant. I love it. You have to write more of this pairing. Much more.
Campaspecs_whitewolf on November 11th, 2005 11:50 am (UTC)
Oh I will definitly be writing more blackcest, and that's a promise- it is just so delicious! Thanks for reading, Cici!

Peace,
Caspe
the_senjou on November 11th, 2005 02:59 am (UTC)
I like how sensual this was. I felt a little dizzy reading it, as though I too were half-asleep and feeling my way. lovely;)
Campaspecs_whitewolf on November 11th, 2005 12:41 pm (UTC)
Thanks for reading, Senjy ::hugs:: I wouldn't say I felt 'dizzy' when writing it, but I certainly felt weird, what with the floaty feelings and all :)

Peace,
Wolfy