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24 May 2007 @ 10:51 pm
HeroesFanFic: Like Flying [Gen. Peter Petrelli]  
Title: Like Flying
Author: cs_whitewolf
Rating(s): PG.
Character: Peter Petrelli.
Warning(s): Character Death.
Word Count: 100words.
Prompt: Written as part of my heroes15Peter Petrelli Table #o12 Death.
 
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Peter sighed deeply, blinking the tears from his eyes as he stared out over New York. It sure was beautiful at night, he noted almost absently as he wiped at his eyes with the back of his hand. He barked out a laugh, loud and cynical as he pushed himself up onto the ledge and spread his arms wide. What a beautiful night to die. He threw his head back and breathed in slowly through his nose as he closed his eyes and took his first tentative step into the nothingness before him. 

It was almost like flying. He laughed.
 
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Fin.
 
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mood: listlesslistless
 
 
 
fajrdrakofajrdrako on May 25th, 2007 03:52 am (UTC)
This sets a wonderful mood - crisp and a little surreal, a bit fey, dark and bright at the same time. Excellent!
Campaspe: Heroes \\ Petrelliscs_whitewolf on May 25th, 2007 05:59 am (UTC)
Thank you! I certainly hadn't expected to get so very much across with this little thing, but I'm very happy you liked it :)

Peace,
CS WhiteWolf
Casey: heroes (peter)casey_bee on May 25th, 2007 07:31 am (UTC)
*sniffle* Lovely ficlet hun and very well written (as always).
Campaspe: Heroes \\ Emo Lovecs_whitewolf on May 25th, 2007 07:35 am (UTC)
Thanks, darling :) I was aiming for something a bit more light hearted, but we all know how emo Peter likes to be, heh.

Peace,
Campaspe
Tori Love: Sam and Peterlostandalone22 on May 26th, 2007 11:10 am (UTC)
Wow! I love the emotion in this. One question: Is it supposed to be before or after he found out that he and Nathan can fly?
Campaspe: Mood \\ Thinking Posecs_whitewolf on May 26th, 2007 04:42 pm (UTC)
Thank you :) I suppose it's really up to you as a reader, when you'd prefer it to be set. For me though, this drabble sprung from a slightly larger fic I'm working on which is set during episode 2 around the scene where Peter gets Nathan to tell him the truth about the whole flying thing.

Glad you enjoyed this!
Peace,
CS WhiteWolf

((UNGH to your icon btw. I love the idea of Peter/Sammy XD ))
Kelly (Kalliopi) aka Yllektraforce_oblique on May 30th, 2007 07:27 pm (UTC)
That was quite intense!!!! Nice work!!
Campaspe: Original \\ Beadscs_whitewolf on May 30th, 2007 11:15 pm (UTC)
Thanks for reading! I'm quite glad I managed that in only one hundred words :D

Peace,
CS WhiteWolf