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02 December 2006 @ 11:09 pm
beyond-redemption.net : Black Velvet [WIP. Snape/Karkaroff]  

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Black Velvet   [ R/18-Rated | Snape/Karkaroff; Karkaroff/Various | Karkaroff seduces each of the Triwizard champions. While Snape watches. | Read Warnings! ]

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I've tentatively named that [Torchwood] rough draft rough fic 'Sinnerman' but I'm having issues with that title. Serious issues. ::glares at nothing in particular:: 

I know everyone'll have lost interested by the time I actually post this bloody piece but I always end up stalling when the 'real smut' starts to happen. Aurora always was so much better at writing that hard-core stuff than I was, I just seem to love my plot too much. :S

Anywho, what I really want to ask is would anyone like to proof read this fic for me? I ended up rewriting a huge chunk so am still around that 2500word mark, but I like nay LOVE what I have so far, I'm just getting nervous about "teh!man secks" and need a boost to finish that up. Anyone? Pretty please? 

Much love to you all!
Campaspe

 
 
music: American Pie § Don Mclean
 
 
 
gemstar69 on December 3rd, 2006 06:18 pm (UTC)
Ohmigod your using my icon *hugs*

I'll read it for you if you like. But the first part of my comments may be, 'sjhbjfhsr;ifv;jfbndjf bloody hell oh my god hawt.' But once that's out of my system it'll be all good.
Campaspe: TW Ianto Jackcs_whitewolf on December 3rd, 2006 07:06 pm (UTC)
Darling I think almost all of my Torchwood icons were made by you! I've had to pace myself with uploading them all! XD

::glomps tight::

Got an email addy I can send the fic to then? Really all I need is a comment saying 'this is not crap. write more, bitch. ::whipcrack::' and I think I'll be good to go, myself. heh.
gemstar69 on December 4th, 2006 12:03 am (UTC)
Yeah, send it to gemgemmao@hotmail.com and I'll read it whilst going 'OMGMOMGOMG I get to read it first OMGOMGOMG.'

Thankyou with kisses x
Campaspe: TW Coffee Magiccs_whitewolf on December 4th, 2006 04:01 pm (UTC)
Thanks very much, darling!

Will email you shortly with what I have.

(Just hope you like it! ::nervous::)